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What This World Can Do (My first public song!)

T Avatar By Siling-La
POSTED: 11 Jul 2019 07:34
CATEGORY: Miscellaneous
FEATURED: Yes (acidapple)
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I am broken
Broken like you
This world can make us
Black and blue

I've heard the stories
I know the truth
But I feel torn by the things this world can do


It can rip
It can tear
leaving scars everywhere
It will shred everything close to you
It can kill
It can fill
Your heart with tears

Oh, what this world can do.

We're all searching
searching for truth
Some have gave up
but some pull through

I've heard the stories
I know the truth
And yet I feel torn by what this world can do

It can rip
It can tear
leaving scars everywhere
It will shred everything close to you
It can kill
It can fill
Your heart with tears

Oh, what this world can do.

But I have a Savior
One who cares
one who will make the night
shine like day

I've heard the stories
I know the truth
And it drowns out all the things
this world could do

So let it rip
oh, let it tear
leaving scars everywhere
'cause I know the scars will point to you
So let it kill
It won't fill
my heart with tears

Oh, what my God can do.









I've wrote a lot of songs before, but this is the first time I've shown anyone lyrics to any of them, even off of paint, so please tell me what you think.

Oh my. This tune is going to be stuck in my head for a while! lol!
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Comments

Avatar Gemini Guardian
12 Jul 2019 03:50
lovely
Avatar cdog3789
11 Jul 2019 23:38
Woah, dude. You have talent!
Avatar Siling-La
12 Jul 2019 01:29
In reply to cdog3789
Thanks, but I think this one is a bit too repetitive. I might try to record music for it, Idk. At least I have a tune.
Avatar Siling-La
11 Jul 2019 17:45
lol. Its a day later, and this song is still stuck in my head!
Avatar Draconid_Jo
11 Jul 2019 08:00
AWESOME!
Avatar Draconid_Jo
11 Jul 2019 14:46
In reply to Draconid_Jo
Now that I have a full battery and have read it completely, let me leave a real comment, lol!

REALLY Good Lyrics.
It's very uplifting (and true), and this is EXACTLY the sort of things I try to say in a lot of my Lyrics/Poems, as well.

God's Power knows NO LIMITS, and there's NOTHING in this World that can't be overcome, with the Power of the Holy Spirit.
(And this is coming from someone who isn't even technically a Christian.)
Avatar Siling-La
11 Jul 2019 17:22
In reply to Draconid_Jo
Wow. That's exactly it, jo.
Avatar acidapple
11 Jul 2019 07:51
i like this
Avatar Siling-La
13 Jul 2019 16:39
In reply to acidapple
Thank you. That is a HUGE compliment coming from you.
Avatar acidapple
13 Jul 2019 16:45
In reply to Siling-La
you're welcome :p
Avatar Siling-La
11 Jul 2019 07:54
In reply to acidapple
WAIT! Why is it rated 'teen'?
Avatar acidapple
11 Jul 2019 08:00
In reply to Siling-La
I thought teen would be more appropriate for mentioning of such scars
Avatar Siling-La
11 Jul 2019 08:04
In reply to acidapple
oh. shoot. I was hoping to keep all my blogs at 'E' but, I understand now. Good call.
Avatar Siling-La
11 Jul 2019 07:52
In reply to acidapple
Thank you.
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