Fireshadow Pt. 1&2


Avatar SkulHedFace
05 Feb 2019 18:35
It does seem to be slightly rushed.

If you wanna keep the originality of it, I’d say leave it how it is.

But if you want it to be book-worthy, yes, I’d do some editing.

Not bad, though.
Avatar banjo2
05 Feb 2019 17:40
It's a bit fast-paced and hard to keep up with, and some typos here and there, but, good!
Avatar AmericanHero999
05 Feb 2019 21:02
In reply to banjo2
I understand... I will try harder.
Avatar Gemini Guardian
05 Feb 2019 18:21
In reply to banjo2
what he saiddd
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