- doesn't "pretend" to offend? I think doesn't "mean" or "intend" to offend is more accurate to what you're trying to say
- make sure you correct the following misspellings: thosw, circunstances, msny
- check your articles: "hay la sciencia" => "there's science" (no the, even though there's a "la"), "¿qué sciencia hace?" => "what does science do?"
- double-check that you capitalize the beginnings of sentences and proper nouns (like I, Christian, Islamic)
- good 'ol its vs it's
- good 'ol make sure you use periods instead of splicing together run-ons with commas