Is it all worth it? This positivity?
Of course it is!What do you mean by this?
I cry, I cry, I cry, then I'm happy!
I smile, I'm Joyful and Cheery! but then, I'm angry.
This mixed emotions.. I can't handle.
Why can't I have only two emotions to gamble?
Why not happiness? Where I can feel free.
Where I can fly and touch the sky or sea.
Why not Love? Where I can be me.
Loving you and loving me is the right place to be.
But I'm chained by the ankles, unable to break free.
These chains are choking me, and I urge myself to flee.
These chains On my ankles and around my neck are so heavy,
I tried to count them all but there are too many,
The walls around me are tall and thick,
The more I scream for help, the more I feel sick
But this is a part of me, right?
This is a part of life, right?
Let go of yourself and stop thinking for once,
Because, Everything in life is pretty and lovely. Even these chains, these walls, the scars, the pain.
They are lovely things
Made up with lovely sins...
But i'll try.. I'll try-
I'll try to overcome the sorrows you gave me with a positive smile.
I'll overcome the shadows you showed me with a positive light.
I'll break these chains that you tied me with and fly across the sky.
making sure this is the last we say good-bye.
Your poem hits different. Its like this dark, poetic storm of sadness and anger that pulls you in, you know? It’s not the kind of beauty that makes you smile, but it sticks with you, heavy and honest, like the kind of emotions that dont get to be prettied up. There’s something about it thats just raw, like it knows exactly how it feels to be caught between all that frustration and heartache. It’s powerful, but in a way that makes you almost wish it wasn’t so real. Honestly, its so well written—each line feels like it was carefully carved out of something real and painful, and the way you’ve captured all that emotion is incredible. Seriously, great job. You’ve turned all that hurt into something beautiful, and that’s not easy
i'm fine- i think- i mean- .. tbh i don't know how I feel. I couldn't understand my emotions today. which is why i wrote this poem. lots of mood swings-
Mexican_man
16 Nov 2024 19:46
In reply to GalacticGam3r37
ahh mood swings i hate mood swings
i get them some times but not anymore since I stop doing something bad