I hope I don't get called guilty in trail iI mumbled to myself.It's horrible here.Even though we have good eats,my rooms tiny,my room mate or as I call him my life ender watches me when I pee!He makes me sleep on the floor!That night as I layed down on the nice concrete floor as prayed and said"Oh,god why you know I didn't do it,I shouldn't be here,just please god please pleed me guilty tomorrow at court Amen."Then I closed my eyes and went to sleep.The next day,I woke up put on my biggest smile yet.When I got inside the court house the judge said "Order in the court."At the end of the couurt he said"Jacob Drew Johnson you are guilty for death charge and fire starting charge which equals five years in jail.When I got back to jail I was put with a different room mate.Which makes me a little happy."Why god why I didn't do it and you know that!"I couldn't go to sleep that night.
What will jail life be like for him?Will they find out he didn't do it?Tune in for Blamed Chapter2 1/2
accepted, reason: it's a good story, but your spelling, punctuation, & all around writing style itself needs a bit of work. Which, I'm sure you'll improve as you go along.