Based on a true story or not... you decide as the reader.
12:00A.M. everyone is full asleep. Am I? *pinch my self* Yes I am. Suddenly it got cold, I could see my own cold breathe. Looks like smoke... keep on doing it until it goes away. Use my Nintendo DSi as a flashlight to see if there is anything in my room. Nothing. Just a red-ish little light on my Nintendo Wii OH WAIT its its its blue... oh nothing just got a wi-fi message, might be for another Mario Kart Wii tournament. I got up to set my Nintendo DSi up, *holds select and up volume* walk over to the Nintendo Wii turns the power on and off really fast quitely so I won't wake my parents. Suddenly my Nintendo DSi closes... My heart was pounding... I quickly ran and grab my Nintendo DSi to my bed... but when I did IT GOT SO COLD then before. Strange I love the cold, makes me stronger but this cold is WAY different... its 1:00A.M. already.
1:00A.M. I'm still not asleep... Thank you God I have no school tomorrow because I passed all my exa... *SQUEAK* the door moved slowly... use my Nintendo DSi light on it and there was nothing... My heart is pounding again. *RING RING RING* What!!! Huh? Just a dream. *sigh* good. *RING RING RING* *looks at iPhone* O.M.G. ※ignores※ the call. *Look at clock*
Its 8:00A.M. Wow don't usually gets up at 10:00A.M. Well since I'm up, I'm gonna cook some eggs! Parents are at work... WOOT I'M ALONE!!! YES!
wow. that creepy. and then it just a dream. last time i had a dream that i was in my room at 10:00pm the bed was moving a little. the phone will ring. and i heard a screem. i got up and there was a light in the bathroom. there was a guy in there and it was some kind of showdo person in there. i ran outside and i found my grandma dead. she was on the ground and i heard screeming in the backyard. after i heard that. then i got up. and I'm like. oh good lord it over. but really good job. lots of details in your story.