"Finally!" I screamed as I ran through the door. "I can get a sword!" Dylan walked down the road and he noticed something rustling in a bush. Dylan wen't to go see what it was but stopped when the thing crawled out of the bush. "N-no, easy boy...er, girl." It was a skunk. Or atleast it looked like a skunk. Dylan took quiet steps back for about a whole five minutes, but the creature would step where ever Dylan went. SWOOSH! It took about 10 seconds to see what had just happened, until he relized the creature got shot with an arrow. Then Dylan heard a voice come out of tree. "Better be careful around those things, they're big flirts, but will start to bite you if they get close enough." Wha- What was that thing?" Dylan asked in a shocked voice.
Great job on this blog. But there are a few things I will like to point out.
1- The story was a little quick. And there would be a better way to start the story.
~Example~
Long ago, there was a hero named Sam who had this really powerful sword. There was a dragon who attack the village. But then, Sam came to save the village. He jump into the air and slice the dragon's neck. They made him as King. So then before he was going to die. He left his sword at a place where no one can find. 100 of years haved past. Someone found the sword that Sam was using. But they needed a new King. So he knew who would be great at fighting. And I'm sure he'll be a great King. Then someone knocked on the door. And he said, how would you like to be king? You will also get a sword. YES!
And that where you come and finish the story. Now Keep going. The story was great! Thumbs up!
DeafDood
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