Dylan walked inside of Oness' shop. It was very dirty, everywhere he stepped a puff of dust would poof up from the carpet, like he was letting off miniture mines everytime he stepped. "Hello?" Dylan cried. "Anyone here?" No response. Dylan looked over at a sign hung up on the roof, and it read: If Oness is not with you now, he will shortly. Dylan looked, and walked around the shop. He noticed a sword in the corner with a red gem looking thing in the handle, and it would glow every so often. Dylan moved closer to it and reached out his hand to touch it, but stopped when he heard a voice. "Hello! How can I help you?" The man said. "Are you Oness?" Dylan asked. "Why yes, of course I am." Oness had a long white dirty beard, a grimy, mucky apron. and it seemed like he had a tatoo of a erebotique. "How much is that one over there?" Dylan asked. Dylan pointed to the red gem one. "Oh, my boy, I only let a certain someone have that, but that someone has not come here yet." Dylan seemed sorry for him. "But, why don't you pick it up! You might be the one!" "Okay..." It almost seemed like he was really excited to have me pick it up, almost like it had a trap on it. Dylan examened it for a moment then picked it up. The red gem grew brighter now when it would glow. " Young hero, you are the one, but sadly, the one, is the one I have to kill." "Wha- What?" Oness started melting into the carpet. No, the dust! Dylan watch as the dust started forming into a huge erebotique. The erebotique was like, 9 feet tall! The erebotique lunged at Dylan, but Dylan sidestepped and stabbed at his knee. "I am the king of all erebotiques! I've searched for you for years! I can't let you live!" Oness screamed. "What!? I'm only 14!" Oness jumped on top of Dylan and bit his arm. "ARGHHHH!" Dylan bellowed. Then all of the sudden the gem glew as bright as infinte lightbulbs put together. Chairs we're smashing to the walls, sword clattering to the ground. Then Dylan blacked out.
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