Dylan awoke in a place with beds lined up in rows. There was a bunch of medical stuff around on tables, and inside of cabinets. Dylan's vision was fuzzy. He tried to lift his head up, but his head was throbbing so bad, that he couldn't. "Ow. Where-?" Dylan said "Shhhh... Lay down." A girl said. Dylan just realized that she's been next to him treating his head. Dylan looked over at the girl. She had beutiful, long, silky black hair, her eyes we're as blue as an ocean at it's best crystal blue, she wore skinny jeans, and a leather jacket. "My name's Elezibeth." The girl said. "H-how long-?" Dylan tried to get as many words out as posible. "Don't worry, you just got here an hour ago. Your at fort Aehro." Elezibeth said. "Why- why am I he-? Dylan's vision started getting really fuzzy, then his eyes closed and he was asleep. Dylan awoke again and he felt much better. Elezibeth wasn't there anymore. There was just a guy next to him on a laptop. "What's going on?" Dylan said. "Oh, good! Your awake!" The man turned around and Dylan realized it was the man he saw before, who killed the erebotique, and called Dylan a "young hero". "You're the- You're from before! I- How-?" "Ah, yes, I live and work here, I had to keep an eye on you. And I have my whole life. I'm Jack, i'm afraid if I told you my name, things would get... Uhm... complicated." "What?" Dylan asked. A loud horn blew from somewhere in the fort. "Ah! Time for dinner! Go outside, Elezibeth is waiting for you." Jack said. Dylan walked outside of the building he was in, and Elezibeth was out on the porch reading a book. "Oh, hi! Remember me? Yes, i'm sure you do, Jack wants me to take you to the diner for dinner. Elezibeth took his hand and led him to a big building with tables and food everywhere.
I got a idea. The reason why your blogs haven't got feature because you need the beginning to be feature. You could copy and past all of the story parts and put it on one blog. It will be so long to read. Try doing that. Or even better. keep on making the story until you get to the end. Then copy and past to one blog. If you were to put 4 parts in one blog. Then you can delete your old blogs and keep the one that have's the four parts. Just a idea to get a blog feature.