I was in the school field alone shivirring in the dark how much longer could she take!?It was my mum shes always late picking me up but this long no I don't remember her taking this long to pick me up.And owl howled in the grey sky as a fast gust of wind nearlly blue me over.FINELLY!my mum had arrived!
I angrelly stomped into the car and every time she tried to talk to me I ignored her and at tea time I was so angry I had lost my appitite.son it was night and time for me to go to sleep.It was night and I had left my certtin open. As I settled down to go to sleep I noticed a flash of light just ahead of me and I no I'm sure I saw a owl could it of been that owl I saw in the field?mayby.
Bigtr, americans will understand shes not from america, and thats ok. Plus, YOU didnt even spell some of those mistakes right. BUt other than that, AWESOME STORY STAR! I never knew you were from Europe!
I know your only 9 but please try to improve your spelling's.
And remember american people might not understand, cause your writing in proper english. But in america etc mum is mom.
I understand it cause i live in england, but keep the american's in mind!!