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If I Died Tomorrow.
By
@Spector2ifi
POSTED: 12 Jun 2011 23:57
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
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If I died tomorrow
Who would care?
No one would be in sorrow.
Not one would shed a tear.
If I died tomorrow,
The world would be as it is.
The wind will still blow
The earth would still turn
If I died tomorrow,
Life would continue.
Technology would go further
Gas prices would grow.
If I died tomorrow,
My family wouldn't mind.
One Child gone,
2 to go.
If I died tomorrow,
My Classmates wouldn't attent my funeral.
They would continue judging people.
The judged would die with me.
If I died tomorrow,
The animals wouldn't know.
They only care for their children.
Like my family should've done to me.
If I died tomorrow,
I wouldn't die.
It's just another day.
I get through all the others.
If I die tomorrow,
I'd stop myself from dieing.
Even though I get depressed,
I should just live this life I have.
If I die tomorrow,
The Good people would heal me.
I'd be grateful and know,
I only have 1 life to live.
+7 -1
Comments
xxemoxkovux
15 Jun 2011 00:46
Wow i feel like this a lot
Spector2ifi
14 Jun 2011 19:33
Mhm
Spector2ifi
14 Jun 2011 01:10
Thanks
Ninfreak
14 Jun 2011 01:07
-claps- dB Nice poem
Dog1209
13 Jun 2011 23:27
it pretty cool :p
Spector2ifi
13 Jun 2011 22:27
Ikr Artifex :/ I had a positive moment while making this Poem =P
Epifex
13 Jun 2011 21:10
Meh, life is all pointless anyway...
Spector2ifi
13 Jun 2011 17:28
Thank yoou
This was an attempt :/
xxtiffanyxx
13 Jun 2011 15:40
Very nice work(:
+1
Dr.Crunchie
13 Jun 2011 15:36
Insanity it dosent't have to rhyme or flow to be a poem
Jonathan.
13 Jun 2011 15:22
Yup, no matter what happens the world will move on without us.
Spector2ifi
13 Jun 2011 01:58
And poems don't ALWAYS Rhyme
Spector2ifi
13 Jun 2011 00:09
I was gonna rhyme it at first but... bleeh
Insanity
13 Jun 2011 00:07
Honestly critisizing it:
It's good. Very expressive.
But, the lines don't always rhyme and the flow isn't too smooth.
Otherwise it's great.
Spector2ifi
13 Jun 2011 00:05
I spelled "Attend" Wrong. -.-'
Spector2ifi
13 Jun 2011 00:03
It's my attempt of the thing i suck at: Poetry. So i won't be surprised if it doesn't get accepted. :/
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