this is a new story im writing, please do not be critical.
REAL LIFE: "Is she dead?" "No Grace has a rare diesease to be lost in her mind." "like shes in accoma?" "yes, but this is more serious, if she doesnt wake up in the next 48 hours im affraid she will be lost in her mind forever."
IN MIND: "hello? where am i? everything is dark and cold." i said stuggeling to walk. i stopped realizing there was someone behind me. "he-hello?" i breathed hard and fast. then suddenly a voice came out. "hello Grace" sounded deep and comforting "w-who is this?" i wrapped my arms around me and looked for a small speck of light. " i am a small symbolic rememberance of your brain, the trigger to the rest of the memories." i couldnt understand so i asked "what do you mean? i dont understand..." the voice was still steady and understanding when it spoke. "i am the first, and most symbolic memory you need to find, there are 13 in all. besides me.if you do not find them all soon, you'll be stuck here forever. to give you a hint... i was your best friend in kindergarden, the one who died in a car crash at 17" a flashback reoccured to me. "Ezra?" the voice sounded astonished and very handsome " yes! you have remembered! now all you have to do is figure out someway to find me in this pitch black, and im yours... ill explain everything." seems logical, but its impossible to find Ezra in the pitch black. "am i in my mind?" Ezra hezitated. "yes. and thats the last question ill answer until you find me." so if im in my mind... i can control everything, just like a dream. if i focus hard enough on turning the room lit, itll happen. right? theres only one way to find out.
ha re-read it lolx i changed the names and made a little switch to pem, its now a handsome man her age, that she'll end up falling in love with ohhhhohoh i already said too much lolx
Was this on Flipnote Hatena? Because I forget what the series was called, I think it was Fatality or something, but this seems really familiar to me...