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10: splitter splatter
By
@MancarCamoran
POSTED: 23 Jul 2011 11:09
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED:
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@Astra Moon
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Pitter Patter
Splitter Splatter
The sound of my heart bleeding a River to drown you in love.
My stupid foolish heart
Now all torn apart
And it's all because
I was blinded by love
And still am
And i bled it out to you
And the lie came too
You said you liked me
I knew it couldn't be
Your too damn beautiful
I was just being wishfull
You liked me for sure
But only as a friend
My heart took a detour
Now it can't be mend
I feel like a sewer
All nasty and sick
I wanna forget
But i'll never forgive
My heart for loving you
I was never supposed to
But how can this be
This feeling cooking within me
Making me love you more
Your the one i'll adore
No matter how many times
My heart get lost in your mines
I'll never give up hope
I'm going all the way
To show how deep my love is
And how real my heart is
I patch the hole on my heart
And i beging the procces over again
Pronouncing my true love for you.
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Comments
@Astra Moon
26 Jul 2011 19:04
Accepted, reason:
This has great form, great spelling, & is very well written. The length is also quite good compared to most I see submitted also.
@MancarCamoran
25 Jul 2011 17:26
never give up on the one you love
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