suicide By DyLaN2448

By @DyLaN2448
POSTED: 18 Aug 2011 07:35
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: No (@Mr. Lord Zeus)
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i just wanna suicide
but i see ur face n feal renuified

i cry at night
wanting to hold u tight

u see my tears
n u gett me singing bears

i like u alot
so come to camolot

dont suicide
cuz id be causin homiside

+3 -4

Comments

@Cutie4
03 Aug 2013 04:44

Your profile comments are locked so, Happy Birthday! to whoever's birthday it is today XD

@FancyPants
03 Aug 2013 01:07

lolol this is really bad

If you want to make a good poem, you should at least try.

It's Your, not Ur. It's And, not N. It's You, not U. It's I'd, not Id. It's Because, not Cuz. It's Don't, not Dont. It's Causing, not Causin. It's Homicide, not Homiside. It's Feel, not Feal.

@DyLaN2448
13 Nov 2011 23:58

Quoth TacticalGAL:

It. Sucked. Balls.

it was my first one so forget u