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thin waste

RP Avatar By RavenOfNevermore
POSTED: 18 Aug 2012 06:44
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (Astra Moon)
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young
smart
confused.
nice eyes
fair complexion,
and a thin waist.

she was tormented by her own
thoughts.

I live on earth once
only 1 life
It doesn't matter that I am
female
white
happy
or sad.

I am just a biological mass.

nothing more
nothing less.

I can die tomorrow
but it honesty would not
matter.

so it doesn't matter
what's the size of my waist
just that I am a thin waste.
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Avatar RavenOfNevermore
19 Aug 2012 23:08
Quoth TheWildwoodDance:
My poem was just as short as mine. xD And yet it's accepted. I guess that's just my luck.


Ya I guess people can't some people cant accept a simple poem.
Like when I saw my grandpa for the first time in years I didn't go
"oh grandpa how have I dearly missed you"
Say "hello" had so much more meaning, even being so simple.
Avatar TheWildwoodDance
19 Aug 2012 17:33
My poem was just as short as mine. xD And yet it's accepted. I guess that's just my luck.
Avatar RavenOfNevermore
18 Aug 2012 21:36
Quoth Windowlicker:
Why did you delete my comment?

And glad you agree, Dice. ;p


I actually didn't mean too. Yesterday I made my account, and I am just getting used too it. If I intended to delete your comment I would've deleted dices as well. You should write your comment again so dice's comment would make more sense. Sorry for the confusion, or the offense I may have caused you.
Avatar RavenOfNevermore
18 Aug 2012 18:38
thanks eveyone for the comments
they r appreciated.
Avatar RavenOfNevermore
18 Aug 2012 18:38
Quoth Astra Moon:
Very good use of words. Very sad words, but very nice.


thamk you, ur thoughts are appreciated.
Avatar RavenOfNevermore
18 Aug 2012 18:36
Quoth CrookedDice:
↓ Amen.... The piece has no body nothing that makes it amazing.


sometimes all you need are simple words.
Avatar CrookedDice
18 Aug 2012 15:38
↓ Amen.... The piece has no body nothing that makes it amazing.
Avatar Astra Moon
18 Aug 2012 08:20
Accepted, Reason: Very good use of words. Very sad words, but very nice.
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