Hello Dsipaint! I haven't been on in a long time, but i just have a small favor to ask.
About 2 weeks ago i started using Fruityloops, which is a music making program. I was intent on making songs over the summer, just as a thing to keep me from burning more hours into my Xbox.
After about 8 hours of work and frustration, I managed to remix Aerodynamic, by Daft Punk.
I have it posted, and would like some of you to listen to it and give me some contructive criticism, so i know how to ruin improve future work.
This would mean a lot to me, I love trying to improve myself.
So here is the link, thank you, and give me your thoughts!
If all goes well, I'll be sure to remix more and make original songs and post them.
I am not gonna accept this blog, too short and most people are still on DSi/3DS and cannot hear this anyway.
I am however going to criticise your track real quick.
First..Too much treble and tss tss, lower the output on that a notch or two.
Secondly, there is nothing to the track, while Aero is more of an old school disco track, your remix took it and made it slightly plain, there is a slight build up around the middle, but nothing to follow through with it except more treble and tss tss tss, when you make a build up in a track, you honestly have to have something to follow it, whether it be a pitch change, or a bass drop or whatever, you have to somewhat follow through on that.
This is a good remix for your first time around and it is probably leaps and bounds better than anything I could muster up, so I am not going to be too critical, but yea, there you go.
By @tehjew1
Hello Dsipaint! I haven't been on in a long time, but i just have a small favor to ask.
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