Why.. is it dark?
I'm awake but it feels like i'm dreamin'
I want to find an exit but I keep looking back,
continuously falling, each time taking longer to get back up.
It's not pitch black, I have matches that burn bright, bringing hope and life to me.
Even so, I cannot help but shiver as the warmth of a roaring bonfire is absent.
They're both fire, why must the flames not feel the same?
Sometimes I think it is apart of some twisted game.
As the night grows older, I remain unfazed.
People usually escape temporarily, I get there too eventually after the race.
3...2...1.. there's the race, seemingly endless thoughts piercing your brain.
I lay there curiously wondering how an individual would successfully avoid his own thoughts and mind.
Perhaps singe them away with a blazing flame?
I chuckle to myself as I strike the next match igniting it.
I feel mindless as I watch the fire fade to nothing.
Then I am left with that familiar darkness.
Ay, thanks for reading this rather short poem.
A small update for those who are interested --
All my writing as of late has been going towards a couple of papers in college, but it felt nice writing this. Even have another paper I am gonna start tomorrow, heck. Anyways, I am coming to a close on my first semester of college and for the most part, things in life are fine, nothing out of the usual going on. See you.
Finrod
22 Nov 2019 14:33
In reply to Gemini Guardian
Youre 100% allowed to over exaggerate/change things for the sake of your artwork if it icludes some sort of meaning.
Here’s an example: if you’ve listened Leave Out All The Rest by linkin park. He actively changes the word “memory†to “memrey†just for the sake of rhyming. Just like how visual artist change lines to change the expressive implications. Like it’s okay if you’ve got a reason.
Unless it’s randomly capitalizing words like someone we know.