One day while Paul was driving home his car just stopped in the middle of the road. He was very confused but got scared when it got dark out when it was just sunny a couple of seconds ago. Paul looked up and saw an alien space ship and he started to run but the aliens were aleady out of their ship chasing Paul. Paul ran into his house and locked the door. Paul dashed to his basememt and grabbed his doubled-barral shotgun. He stationed himself next to his door ready to fight. When the aliens knocked on the door Paul opened the door and shoot the two aiens. As they were dying the one alien said to Paul "All we wanted to do- *cough* -was borrow some money for tacos because we were hungry." Paul felt bad so he ran to the fridge grabbed some leftover tacos and gave it to the aliens. The aliens were revived and gave Paul 1 million dollars. Then the aliens left and Paul was happy until........... He woke up from thid dream.
accepted, reason: It's ok....odd, lol. Could use help with the punctuation. More exists then just the period. But noone is perfect. Who knows, maybe you'll get lots of readers?