Hey guys! This is my first short story on here. I may or may not continue it, but it depends on reviews i get, so give me your feedback! kthanxbai.
Dream Troubles
Finally, it was night. Time for me to sleep after a hard day of school. As i rest my head on my pillow, i wondered if tomorrow will be as stressful as today. I prayed not, then i pulled the covers over myself and shut my eyes. Then i began think of the highlights of the day to get my mind to rest. There wasn't much but there wee a few things: I saw my crush. I saw my friends. Didn't argue at home. Ate dinner with my family. Soon, slowy i began drifting into sleep. In an instant i was sleep. I don't remember how long it was until i started dreaming, but probably in a few hours. It's weird, 'cause i remember the dream so clearly. It confuses me to this day. Anyway, it was this: There i was, in an all white room, dressed in a white dress. I was lying on the floor, so i got up and walked around, noticing i was barefoot. Out of nowhere i heard a man's voice call my name, "Dana, Dana?" I quickly turned around and saw a handsome young man dressed in a all white suit. Everything he had on was white, his slightly pale skin, brown cut hair and his blue eyes being the only thing of color on him.
"Um, hello?" i anxiously said to the handsome stranger.
"Ah, hello, you are Dana. Now hurry you are late for your wedding!" the man briskly said.
"Huh? W-wedding? But if only 14! What do you mean? Who the heck are you anyway?" i asked, confused.
"For how could you forget me, i'm your husband to be, my dear? Now hurry, we're late for our wedding!" he really was in hurry.
"W-wait a minute here, your nice and all but i can't marrry you! First of all, i just met you and i don't even know your name! Second, you do look young and all, but i think there's a bit of a age gap between us. Now anyways, what's your name and where am i?"
"You ask too many questions, Dana" he said before he changed.
accepted, reason: This was a good read. You're a good writer, but there is more to punctuation then the period & quotation marks. Try comma's & such. Caps are also detrimental to a well written story.