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Bring On The Sunshine
By
@psycho pk
POSTED: 10 Mar 2011 04:44
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED:
Yes
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@Astra Moon
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i walk outside
i breathe in the fresh air
im walking with pride
im searching for your stare
no, you arent a stalker
you are the prince
i am the pauper
ive adored you since
you look in my eyes
with the sun shining through
we tell no lies
this is no coup
if this is love
bring on th sunshine
you are peaceful as a dove
im so glad you're mine
i close my eyes to sleep
your face drifts into my dreams
your secrets ill forever keep
no matter what the odds may seem
i open my eyes and see your face
i see the love and i dont need any cheesy lines
i just need your love and grace
bring on the sunshine
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Comments
Schmelzen
11 Mar 2011 12:11
Nice job, big bro! Grammar is killing me, though... lol XD
bobknows
10 Mar 2011 22:57
"time is meaningless in the face of creativity" and i would say the same for grammar too. however, it would make it look better.
keep it up, its always a pleasure to read.
JavaWocky
10 Mar 2011 14:55
lol
Astra Moon
10 Mar 2011 07:21
Accepted, reason:
This is good, but it would look better, even a bit more professional, dare I say, if you were to use capitals where needed.
psycho pk
10 Mar 2011 05:27
thanks, babe!
Garret Squall
10 Mar 2011 05:24
Adorable
33 Euphonic and simple... love it.
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