lovee By kittiebabess13

By kittiebabess13
POSTED: 19 Mar 2011 00:50
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (GleeoK)
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lovee starts with a smile,grows with a kiss,ends with a tear :'(

everyone hurts youh,but youh jus gotta find the right one sufferingq for

dont fall 02 hard in lovee or else it will give a black nose n a broken eye

not cool

somtimee youh thingq doingq this or gettingq this is the best thingq in the world well if somthingq good happened 02 youh well cover up uz somthingq bad is comingq youh way

ii kno this for a fact

+4 -1

Comments

DaniDestruction
23 Mar 2011 04:46

You* Just* suffering* And* Thing* Doing* Getting* Something* Coming* Know*

kittiebabess13
20 Mar 2011 23:27

yup lol

JaMmIeSpLoGe123
20 Mar 2011 23:08

every g ends in a q 8D

kittiebabess13
20 Mar 2011 15:18

aww thanxss

kittiebabess13
19 Mar 2011 23:12

thank you!!!

GleeoK
19 Mar 2011 22:47

xD! I loved it! it does send the message lol.

And i like how you put the smilies in, and the words you choose.

But its too short to be on the featured list without any strategically placed structural tags, and...i don't reccomend changing the word's letters that way, it may seem cool when u read but it doesn't make the blog look stectically good....

But you did a really good job, if you update it or change anything and want me to review it again i will. then it might get featured =]

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