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Tactful Teasin'

RP Avatar By Lizzie
POSTED: 26 Apr 2012 17:22
CATEGORY: Poetry and Lyrics
FEATURED: Yes (BanMan)
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Hey dad can i have two dollars?
Sure when i become three scholars!
Daddy may we pretty please go to the sunny seaside shore show?

Must you be a complete bother?
Yes thats why you're the child and im the father.
Now STOP asking me throughout the day;why you can never have your way!

Why must my papa provoke me?
He lovesjoke to as you can see
well now its my turn i'll show him;that two can play on a jungle gym.

One day his favorite team will play
i'll promise my dad we'll take him away.
When he tries to start the car,
he'll get to see what unveils to be my trickery!

On the other end of the stick
being tricked feels completely sick!
I really do adore my dad but now his tricks are just a fad!
~Lizzie
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Comments

Avatar Lizzie
01 May 2012 00:13
hmm...jack thts not rlly possible unless u go to my school where i presented this
Avatar Jack10
30 Apr 2012 02:46
Not saying this is plagiarism, but this sounds EXTREMELY familiar.
Avatar Black1Death
28 Apr 2012 20:38
Nice. Its kindof funny!
Avatar Lizzie
28 Apr 2012 00:14
haha thnx for the feedback guys!
Avatar WhaleFreak
27 Apr 2012 01:56
Finally some decent poetry. Damn xD
Avatar iSuCkErZz2
26 Apr 2012 23:41
Quoth BanMan:
IT'S A POEM THAT'S NOT ABOUT DEPRESSION!!! +1
Lol xD Not all are about depression. Or love. I tend to think of love songs, because I'm just good at them. Take my sister for instance. She was always depressed. She wrote 5-star poems, but they were about what she gets put through. True story bro.
Avatar BanMan
26 Apr 2012 22:15
IT'S A POEM THAT'S NOT ABOUT DEPRESSION!!! +1
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