2. Pointless cameo. [eg. As arrows flew overhead we all ducked. Then one hit PORKS who happened to be passing through. OH NOES. Anyway, continueing...]
3. Your mother
One bread ahead of the bread. Two bread; too much bread.
LOLOLOLOL PORKS!!!also:i agree with subtle..but I do think your story could use a Billdoh in it..Lead role, sarcastic guy who is always in some sort of mischief.. >:)
i dont know what charactors to roleplay for...but. i will say an intrest...
1-i dont know much about medivel. but would be interested
2-a role for me would be the star girl i guess. someone who is adventures and a tag'a'long
3- i would be interested in anymore parts in other stories.