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DeafDood
10 May 2011 03:51

Some of the parts I past is mess up. But that was just a example to get your blog featured. ^-^

DeafDood
10 May 2011 03:49

I copy and past all of the stories you made in to one blog. Try doing that and keep going on your series! Good job on that blog you made.


Elezibeth grabbed a sword from the ground, and Dylan saw that it was the red ruby one. "Jack picked it up for you." She said. "It's Called: The Fate's of Doom." "Scary name" Dylan replied. Elezibeth laughed. "Yeah, most of these swords have wierd names." Elezibeth unsheathed a knife from her boot that had a blue gem in it. "This is my weapon, got when I was eight, the monster I fought barfed it up when I punched it in the gut." "Hahaha! Nice! So, what kinda powers do I have?" Dylan asked. "Well depending on your gem, you can controll electricity, make fall from the sky, give people an electric punch, whatever. As long as it has to do with electicity, you can do anything. I can controll snow, and ice." She replied. Jack ran to the middle of the field and yelled: "Warriors! Heroes! On your mark, get set, capture!" Elezibeth screamed over the cheering and war sounds: Just get the flag, and bring it back here!" She ran off into the battle. Dylan ran out too. A kid that looked about Dylan's age jumped out of a tree and lunged at him. Dylan sidesteped but was too slow, the kid was able to slice Dylan's ankle. "ARGHHH!" Dylan bellowed. Dylan was on his knees now blocking sword swings that the kid tried to do. The kid lunged again and knocked Dylan's sword out of his hand. The kid pushed Dylan to the ground and got on top of him and pinned his arms to the ground. The kid then opened his mouth wide and his eyes turned black. Then black smoke slowly started coming out of his mouth. Dylan knew he was a dead man in a few seconds, but then he remembered; "You can do anything as long as it has to do with electricity". Dylan shut his eyes close and concentrated really hard. Then Dylan felt all staticy, his hair started sticking up, he was about an inch off the ground. Dylan screamed: "Argh!!!" And lurched his body and hands forward in a pushig motion. Then the kid got sent 15 feet back at "sonic-speed" to a tree, then him and the tree exploded.
Elezibeth and I sat down at a table with some other kids. "You hungry?" Elezibeth asked. "Hungry for answers" Dylan replied. "I don't get all this stuff. I'm a "Young hero". What's that even mean? And why am I here? How did I do that thing with my sword, and who's the "Erebotique king"? Elezibeth sighed."Yeah, I know, that's how each and every kid got here. they battle something and all the sudden get here. You're here because you're one of us now, a biclupsinon. A biclupsinon is a kid with deadly powers, in a good way. Jack, as you met him earlier, gets a report that there's a biclupsinon, and he keeps an eye on them and brings him here when the time is right." Elezibeth said. "But what do we do here? I mean, we seriously can't just stay here." "No, we get quests every so often, and when we don't have a quest, we train, train and train. We take quests and train until we're adults, then we get Jack's job. We have to be a Watcher if we survive to be an adult. "If we? You mean some do-" Dylan got interupted by a man sitting at a large table in the back. "Attention kids! Enough chit chat, everyone get your food!" Elezibeth lead Dylan to another table with food on it. When Elezibeth and I got our food we we'nt back to our table and started eating. Dylan got some fruit and a steak, and Elezibeth got some wierd jelly looking thing. "What's that?" Dylan asked. "A supsiloin." She replied. (Like that cleared it up) When we we're done with our food Elezibeth lead Dylan to a big field with two flags at each side and a bunch of kids with swords and spears. "Ready to train" She said with a wicked grin. "Ho- Hold on! I can't do that!" "Oh yeah you can!" She took Dylan's arm and ran with Dylan to the blue flag that had a bunch of swords and armor on the ground for kids to use.
Dylan awoke in a place with beds lined up in rows. There was a bunch of medical stuff around on tables, and inside of cabinets. Dylan's vision was fuzzy. He tried to lift his head up, but his head was throbbing so bad, that he couldn't. "Ow. Where-?" Dylan said "Shhhh... Lay down." A girl said. Dylan just realized that she's been next to him treating his head. Dylan looked over at the girl. She had beutiful, long, silky black hair, her eyes we're as blue as an ocean at it's best crystal blue, she wore skinny jeans, and a leather jacket. "My name's Elezibeth." The girl said. "H-how long-?" Dylan tried to get as many words out as posible. "Don't worry, you just got here an hour ago. Your at fort Aehro." Elezibeth said. "Why- why am I he-? Dylan's vision started getting really fuzzy, then his eyes closed and he was asleep. Dylan awoke again and he felt much better. Elezibeth wasn't there anymore. There was just a guy next to him on a laptop. "What's going on?" Dylan said. "Oh, good! Your awake!" The man turned around and Dylan realized it was the man he saw before, who killed the erebotique, and called Dylan a "young hero". "You're the- You're from before! I- How-?" "Ah, yes, I live and work here, I had to keep an eye on you. And I have my whole life. I'm Jack, i'm afraid if I told you my name, things would get... Uhm... complicated." "What?" Dylan asked. A loud horn blew from somewhere in the fort. "Ah! Time for dinner! Go outside, Elezibeth is waiting for you." Jack said. Dylan walked outside of the building he was in, and Elezibeth was out on the porch reading a book. "Oh, hi! Remember me? Yes, i'm sure you do, Jack wants me to take you to the diner for dinner. Elezibeth took his hand and led him to a big building with tables and food everywhere.
Dylan awoke in a place with beds lined up in rows. There was a bunch of medical stuff around on tables, and inside of cabinets. Dylan's vision was fuzzy. He tried to lift his head up, but his head was throbbing so bad, that he couldn't. "Ow. Where-?" Dylan said "Shhhh... Lay down." A girl said. Dylan just realized that she's been next to him treating his head. Dylan looked over at the girl. She had beutiful, long, silky black hair, her eyes we're as blue as an ocean at it's best crystal blue, she wore skinny jeans, and a leather jacket. "My name's Elezibeth." The girl said. "H-how long-?" Dylan tried to get as many words out as posible. "Don't worry, you just got here an hour ago. Your at fort Aehro." Elezibeth said. "Why- why am I he-? Dylan's vision started getting really fuzzy, then his eyes closed and he was asleep. Dylan awoke again and he felt much better. Elezibeth wasn't there anymore. There was just a guy next to him on a laptop. "What's going on?" Dylan said. "Oh, good! Your awake!" The man turned around and Dylan realized it was the man he saw before, who killed the erebotique, and called Dylan a "young hero". "You're the- You're from before! I- How-?" "Ah, yes, I live and work here, I had to keep an eye on you. And I have my whole life. I'm Jack, i'm afraid if I told you my name, things would get... Uhm... complicated." "What?" Dylan asked. A loud horn blew from somewhere in the fort. "Ah! Time for dinner! Go outside, Elezibeth is waiting for you." Jack said. Dylan walked outside of the building he was in, and Elezibeth was out on the porch reading a book. "Oh, hi! Remember me? Yes, i'm sure you do, Jack wants me to take you to the diner for dinner. Elezibeth took his hand and led him to a big building with tables and food everywhere.
Dylan walked inside of Oness' shop. It was very dirty, everywhere he stepped a puff of dust would poof up from the carpet, like he was letting off miniture mines everytime he stepped. "Hello?" Dylan cried. "Anyone here?" No response. Dylan looked over at a sign hung up on the roof, and it read: If Oness is not with you now, he will shortly. Dylan looked, and walked around the shop. He noticed a sword in the corner with a red gem looking thing in the handle, and it would glow every so often. Dylan moved closer to it and reached out his hand to touch it, but stopped when he heard a voice. "Hello! How can I help you?" The man said. "Are you Oness?" Dylan asked. "Why yes, of course I am." Oness had a long white dirty beard, a grimy, mucky apron. and it seemed like he had a tatoo of a erebotique. "How much is that one over there?" Dylan asked. Dylan pointed to the red gem one. "Oh, my boy, I only let a certain someone have that, but that someone has not come here yet." Dylan seemed sorry for him. "But, why don't you pick it up! You might be the one!" "Okay..." It almost seemed like he was really excited to have me pick it up, almost like it had a trap on it. Dylan examened it for a moment then picked it up. The red gem grew brighter now when it would glow. " Young hero, you are the one, but sadly, the one, is the one I have to kill." "Wha- What?" Oness started melting into the carpet. No, the dust! Dylan watch as the dust started forming into a huge erebotique. The erebotique was like, 9 feet tall! The erebotique lunged at Dylan, but Dylan sidestepped and stabbed at his knee. "I am the king of all erebotiques! I've searched for you for years! I can't let you live!" Oness screamed. "What!? I'm only 14!" Oness jumped on top of Dylan and bit his arm. "ARGHHHH!" Dylan bellowed. Then all of the sudden the gem glew as bright as infinte lightbulbs put together. Chairs we're smashing to the walls, sword clattering to the ground. Then Dylan blacked out.
When the man jumped off the tree Dylann noticed it was a man he think he 's seen before. He was muscley, He wore tattered pants, and had short spikey hair, He held a bow in his left hand, and had quiver full of arrows. "Those are erebotiques." The man took the arrow out of the erebotique's head. "Perfect shot." The man said. "Who are you?" Dylan asked. "My name, is not for you to know yet, young hero". He said "hero" like I was a bad kid. Dylan looked at the dead erebotique, and said: "What do you mean? "young hero"?" But when Dylan looked back, the man was gone. "Wierd." Dylan muttered. Dylan walked down the road t'il he finally reached the village. Dylan heard a man cry: "Hey Dylan!" Dylan looked to his left and saw a man in a fish store. He had an apron on, and had a fluffy charcol looking beard. "Hey, Frank!" Dylan said back. What're you doing here? Your mom never let's you come here unless it's important." "I'm getting my first sword"! "Oh... Well becareful with it. Hahaha!" "Okay bye." Dylan walked around the village until he saw a shop that read; "Oness' Sword Shop"
"Finally!" I screamed as I ran through the door. "I can get a sword!" Dylan walked down the road and he noticed something rustling in a bush. Dylan wen't to go see what it was but stopped when the thing crawled out of the bush. "N-no, easy boy...er, girl." It was a skunk. Or atleast it looked like a skunk. Dylan took quiet steps back for about a whole five minutes, but the creature would step where ever Dylan went. SWOOSH! It took about 10 seconds to see what had just happened, until he relized the creature got shot with an arrow. Then Dylan heard a voice come out of tree. "Better be careful around those things, they're big flirts, but will start to bite you if they get close enough." Wha- What was that thing?" Dylan asked in a shocked voice.

SuperBoss121
05 May 2011 20:54

Hello

Sniped Hearts
03 May 2011 21:04

Hello. Check the blogs now

Dr.Crunchie
03 May 2011 20:59

Gotta go bye

Dr.Crunchie
02 May 2011 21:24

U ROCK EPICNESS ONE! THANKS!

welive56
02 May 2011 09:22

or on 2nd thoughts what smilies do you know?

Dr.Crunchie
02 May 2011 09:20

I hate it when ppl I dont know randomly add me,its annoying o-o

welive56
02 May 2011 08:41

what smilies do you know and can you add me

DeafDood
01 May 2011 19:37

No one is gonna care about that. Try doing this in real life or on another website. Try blogging.com or opera.com That's the best place to show your religion to others.